Monday, February 20, 2017

Review Essay Rough Draft

How Amazing Are You!
            “What can you contribute to our corporation,” the straight-to-the-fact interviewer in an unscathed business uniform asked? “Well I am a hard-worker, I am very creative and I am easy to work with,” I replied, in an uncertain voice, hoping that I sounded somewhat confident. “But what are you good at, what did you accomplish in life?”, pushed the interviewer in an overly-confident voice that clearly outshone and diminished my shaky and nervous appeal. “Well I was a cross-country captain in high school, I won the national merit scholarship, I graduated from Stanford university with honors in Physics, I won a national chess tournament, I have consistently won the presidential award for volunteering every year since 8th grade and I started a charity the homeless that has grown nationwide.” I breathed sigh of relief and thought, “What a long list!” The interviewer jotted down some notes on her clean and orderly notepad, with a very expensive looking, and shiny, ballpoint pen. “Ok that will be all, you may leave,” was all she said in a very bored voice.
            In a world where we rush to get from one job to another, or one extracurricular to the next, we often label ourselves as great based on our accomplishments, wealth or popularity. This façade called the “American Dream” often pushed us the brink of exhaustion, just so we can feel validated by our jobs or hobbies. We let our jobs or wealth define us, and sometimes we use it to justify that we are better, smarter or more amazing than others. This can sometimes lead us into a nationwide rat race, where we just keep thinking that what we are is not enough. Though many look to the American Dream as an idealized goal, I would say that it is a misguided notion that is leading us into despair. Here, I will explain why.
            The “American” dream, not the European dream or the worldwide dream, just “American” dream. The dream does not even refer to Canada, Mexico, Latin America or South America, which are all indeed part of the Americas. It just refers to those who live in the United States, which is amazingly exclusive. Though some may argue that the American Dream was meant to encourage and inspire the citizens of a growing nation that was founded in July 4th, 1776, it really did not turn out that way. It was first used to encourage the so-called “Americans” to expand their territory, which was, for the most part, taken forcefully from the Native Americans that lived there. The reason we took the land, we say, was because we believed that we were better than those savage Native Americans who did not practice Christianity, the greatest and most powerful religion.
Now you might be asking how this applies to the current day United States. “We apologized to those Indians (the term we called them and still do today, even though they are not in fact Indians) and the abusive treatment of the Indians leaves a dark mark in United States history,” you might say. Well I say, “Have we ever returned their lands? Have we ever apologized for manipulating them into signing land treaties, instead of just apologizing for their bad treatment?” I believe in the saying that “old habits die hard”. We thought we were better than the Native Americans throughout the 18th to 19th century, and yet now we believe that we are better than the world in the 21st century.
This cultural basis of superiority destroys us from within as well, since not only do we think that we are better than people from outside the U.S., but we think that we are better than other U.S. citizens as well. According to Mark Manson, author of the essay, “The American Dream is Killing us” the misguided American Dream leads us to exploiting others, justifying people’s value on what they achieve and enforces the belief that people get what they deserve. It is no wonder how these actions lead to mass competitiveness for popularity, smartness or wealth.
A testament to this vicious cut-throat nature, is seen in the introduction. No matter how much you do, there is a part of you that feels that you are not enough. American society encourages this, making you feel inferior and inspiring you to continue working yourself to death to validate yourself. I personally have seen this in my High School. It seems scary that this attitude has spread to the younger nature, but it has. Walking through the bustling, way too bright hallways I recall why I left high school to do PSEO. My group of friends was termed as the nerd group and they kept with their title as if it proved that they belonged there. I always felt off with them. I never realized it until I left. All they cared about was studying and working. They rarely had fun or free time, keeping busy with orchestra, band, soccer, tennis, volunteering or the multitude of other extracurricular that they felt required to do. They never could just sit and read a book, or watch TV. They could never relax because they could not let themselves. They had to work so much, and I agree that some did it for passion, but it was not very long before that passion turned into something more manufactured. I know this, because I was like them up to a point. I drove myself crazy thinking that I needed to be doing something with every second of my time. Up until a year ago, when I escaped that rat race, I never realized that there were other, more important things in life.
Though the idea of American Superiority dominated the mind in the 18th and 19th centuries, the competition for material wealth became heavily emphasized in the 20th century. According to Kimberly Amadeo, writer of the essay “What is the American Dream Today”, “Over time, the definition of happiness started to change. In the 1920s, it became the acquisition of material things, as exemplified by the novel The Great Gatsby. A pursuit of happiness driven by greed was not attainable because someone else always had more. This greed led to the stock market crash of 1929 and the Great Depression.” The pursuit of happiness is still something that exists very much today. But, if happiness is not the acquisition of wealth or material belongings, like the American Dream states, what is it?
According to the World Happiness Index, the U.S. is ranked at 13 out of 53 countries. For a country that promotes the pursuit of happiness as a part of the American Dream, shouldn’t we be ranked higher on the list? This implies that working is not everything and it is certainly not the basis for happiness. To look into what happiness is, we are going to look at an interesting survey that recorded the top regrets of people before they died. In a list of 5 regrets, the second biggest regret is “I wish I hadn’t worked so hard.” Nowhere on the list did people regret not having enough fame or wealth. Other regrets included, “I wish I had stayed in touch with my friends, I wish I’d had the courage to express my feelings and I wish that I had less myself be happier.” When I tried to figure out what happiness is, I happened upon an interesting conclusion. Happiness is a choice, it is not a race, it is not an unattainable object, it is a choice.
I did not intend to completely bash the United States, I just wanted to point out some key flaws in something that I think can greatly be improved. There are better definitions of an American dream. Amadeo states in her article a new dream, “For example, the Center for a New American Dream envisions "... a focus on more of what really matters, such as creating a meaningful life, contributing to community and society, valuing nature, and spending time with family and friends."” Happiness comes from within. Ultimately it comes down to one choice, work on industrialized passions or find a real passion and spend time with those you love? The choice is ultimately up to you, but always remember that one of the biggest regrets in life was “I wished I hadn’t worked so hard” not “I wished I had worked more”.



Works Cited
Amdeo, Kimberly. “What Is the American Dream Today?” The Balance. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Feb.
2017. < https://www.thebalance.com/what-is-the-american-dream-today-3306027>.
Hrala, Josh. "The World Happiness Index 2016 Just Ranked the Happiest Countries on
Earth." ScienceAlert. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Feb. 2017. < http://www.sciencealert.com/the-world-happiness-index-2016-just-ranked-the-happiest-countries-on-earth>.
Manson, Mark. "The American Dream Is Killing Us." Mark Manson. N.p., 30 Jan. 2017. Web.
            19 Feb. 2017. < https://markmanson.net/american-dream>.
Moore, Susie. "The 5 Biggest Regrets People Have Before They Die." Greatist. Greatist, 07 Feb.
            2017. Web. 19 Feb. 2017. < http://greatist.com/live/most-common-regrets>.





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